Balcony Scene
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leanne has said it all... i would reiterate "the between us contains fifteen years" is out of place, and 'fifteen years of space between us' works better. I must confess, I love Shakespeare [guilty as charged] and reading this piece is great.
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Balcony Scene - by MissAddy - 04-21-2013, 07:05 AM
RE: Balcony Scene - by Leanne - 04-21-2013, 07:13 AM
RE: Balcony Scene - by shemthepenman - 04-21-2013, 07:21 AM
RE: Balcony Scene - by MissAddy - 04-21-2013, 07:27 AM
RE: Balcony Scene - by Leanne - 04-21-2013, 07:28 AM
RE: Balcony Scene - by billy - 04-21-2013, 09:17 AM



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