After Class

[popeye]

Thanks for a most enjoyable read billy, funny and witty, had me cackling for ages! To me it reads fine, as I think Todd and milo's critiques are pertinent I can't think of any more to add except that if 'Littlewoods' and Smoked salmon sandwiches were intended as entendres they worked for me! Also Greenhill and sewer pipes worked as a combination. Delightfully irreverent. Cheers mate