04-20-2013, 06:20 AM
ok, i can't give a line by line [todd's on its case], but fuck me I love this one! oh, and I have previously said I hate the word 'tits' but here it is so perfectly timed and just great. oh fuck, and the littlewoods ref. is just perfect! and 'embarrassingly' perfect likewise
my only, dare i say, 'issue' is that it is possibly a little too prosaic. I was thinking it need not have line breaks. but, I will have to look over it again, so don't take this as read.
my only, dare i say, 'issue' is that it is possibly a little too prosaic. I was thinking it need not have line breaks. but, I will have to look over it again, so don't take this as read.