04-19-2013, 03:40 PM
I've always enjoyed, nay loved poems that hark back to the days of someones youth, more so when it involves a shared expereience. My love ,obsession call it what you will was Miss Chorleton who as you can guess has been subject to a poem from me. the shopping catalougue reference brought a smile too.
Nothing major to quibble about from me other than the dropping of Miss from the second mention of her name.I can see several reasons for it but my main feeling is it takes her from an subject of adoration to just another teacher, maybe it is intended to show a shift in perception.
enjoyed, ummmmmm Miss Chorleton.....thanks for the mammaries
Nothing major to quibble about from me other than the dropping of Miss from the second mention of her name.I can see several reasons for it but my main feeling is it takes her from an subject of adoration to just another teacher, maybe it is intended to show a shift in perception.
enjoyed, ummmmmm Miss Chorleton.....thanks for the mammaries
never make someone your priority when to them you are only an option