I wish I could touch you without wanting to hurt myself
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I got a sense of the strong emotions in the poem, right from the title. But I miss some clearer images to really express those feelings. And the lack of punctuation, to me, isn't doing any good. Thanks for the read Smile
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RE: I wish I could touch you without wanting to hurt myself - by Volaticus - 04-19-2013, 07:44 AM



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