04-19-2013, 06:30 AM
Enjoyed the read, the opening lines drew me in from the off. I think you could maybe give a hint as to the present age of the writer by stating an age, when I'm 65 or something though that spoil the reverse at the end.
Being picky here but you would'nt hear the Archers on radio three, it's on radio four, artistic licence
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Being picky here but you would'nt hear the Archers on radio three, it's on radio four, artistic licence
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never make someone your priority when to them you are only an option