Blinded by my desire

Blinded by my desire

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04-17-2013, 11:03 PM

No, it isn't interesting at all. The poem is vague, repetitive, and doesn't say much. If you approached the content with the idea of adding imagery you might be able to make it interesting.

The secret of poetry is cruelty.--Jon Anderson

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Blinded by my desire - by halcro - 04-17-2013, 06:27 AM

RE: Blinded by my desire - by tectak - 04-17-2013, 06:36 AM

RE: Blinded by my desire - by Volaticus - 04-17-2013, 08:07 AM

RE: Blinded by my desire - by halcro - 04-18-2013, 02:57 AM

RE: Blinded by my desire - by halcro - 04-17-2013, 04:14 PM

RE: Blinded by my desire - by Todd - 04-17-2013, 08:00 PM

RE: Blinded by my desire - by milo - 04-17-2013, 08:27 PM

RE: Blinded by my desire - by halcro - 04-17-2013, 09:01 PM

RE: Blinded by my desire - by Leanne - 04-17-2013, 04:25 PM

RE: Blinded by my desire - by tectak - 04-17-2013, 06:54 PM

RE: Blinded by my desire - by milo - 04-17-2013, 06:55 PM

RE: Blinded by my desire - by Todd - 04-17-2013, 08:31 PM

RE: Blinded by my desire - by milo - 04-17-2013, 08:34 PM

RE: Blinded by my desire - by Todd - 04-17-2013, 08:36 PM

RE: Blinded by my desire - by milo - 04-17-2013, 08:38 PM

RE: Blinded by my desire - by Todd - 04-17-2013, 11:03 PM

RE: Blinded by my desire - by rowens - 04-17-2013, 11:15 PM

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