04-17-2013, 08:27 PM
(04-17-2013, 08:00 PM)Todd Wrote:what about the cliches, Todd? Are you cool with the cliches?(04-17-2013, 04:14 PM)halcro Wrote:Okay, if we lay all those areas aside. It also needs imagery to be interesting.(04-17-2013, 06:27 AM)halcro Wrote: I was blinded by my desire for too long.
Loving and caring,
She was,
Always helping me to succeed.
Yet,
She stood before me,
Blinded by her presence,
I did not see.
Everything here is meant to be so do not comment on structure, grammar or punctuation.