Blinded by my desire

[milo]

I was blinded by my desire for too long.
Loving and caring.
She was, always helping me to succeed.
Yet,
She stood before me,
Blinded by her presence,
I did not see.

Hi halcro,
I said I would come back but you had moved. I noted your comments re. what sort of crit you wanted and didn't want, so all I can really say is its not very good.
Best,
tectak on a good day.

I am not sure what discussion is appropriate in miscellaneous. I also did not find it good but for perhaps entirely different reasons(?)