Blinded by my desire
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That doesn't leave much to comment on. This is the Serious Critique forum and I'm afraid you can't pick and choose what people critique. I will move this to the Miscellaneous forum for now, but warn you that if you're just here to have people praise your poetry, you're in the wrong place.
It could be worse
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Blinded by my desire - by halcro - 04-17-2013, 06:27 AM
RE: Blinded by my desire - by tectak - 04-17-2013, 06:36 AM
RE: Blinded by my desire - by Volaticus - 04-17-2013, 08:07 AM
RE: Blinded by my desire - by halcro - 04-18-2013, 02:57 AM
RE: Blinded by my desire - by halcro - 04-17-2013, 04:14 PM
RE: Blinded by my desire - by Todd - 04-17-2013, 08:00 PM
RE: Blinded by my desire - by milo - 04-17-2013, 08:27 PM
RE: Blinded by my desire - by halcro - 04-17-2013, 09:01 PM
RE: Blinded by my desire - by Leanne - 04-17-2013, 04:25 PM
RE: Blinded by my desire - by tectak - 04-17-2013, 06:54 PM
RE: Blinded by my desire - by milo - 04-17-2013, 06:55 PM
RE: Blinded by my desire - by Todd - 04-17-2013, 08:31 PM
RE: Blinded by my desire - by milo - 04-17-2013, 08:34 PM
RE: Blinded by my desire - by Todd - 04-17-2013, 08:36 PM
RE: Blinded by my desire - by milo - 04-17-2013, 08:38 PM
RE: Blinded by my desire - by Todd - 04-17-2013, 11:03 PM
RE: Blinded by my desire - by rowens - 04-17-2013, 11:15 PM



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