04-17-2013, 10:00 AM
(04-16-2013, 09:13 PM)trueenigma Wrote:(04-16-2013, 02:25 PM)billy Wrote: it's the for fun forum guysI know its for fun. Not a critique, just having fun with the lines.
i often change my clothes while walking up stairs also
I'm changing out of my pajamas and going to work.
A fine poem though I found it rather dark for the fun poetry.
Regardless, enjoyed it immensely.



