3 am (a short attempt at iambic pentameter)
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(04-16-2013, 09:13 PM)trueenigma Wrote:  
(04-16-2013, 02:25 PM)billy Wrote:  it's the for fun forum guys Wink

i often change my clothes while walking up stairs also Big Grin
I know its for fun. Not a critique, just having fun with the lines.

I'm changing out of my pajamas and going to work.

A fine poem though I found it rather dark for the fun poetry.
Regardless, enjoyed it immensely.
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