Technicalities

Technicalities

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04-17-2013, 08:53 AM

I generally liked the bones of the poem just had issues with some line breaks. It can be developed. The tone of it was what I enjoyed, but I've already given my comments.

The secret of poetry is cruelty.--Jon Anderson

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Technicalities - by Ganman - 04-16-2013, 07:00 PM

RE: Technicalities - by tectak - 04-16-2013, 08:53 PM

RE: Technicalities - by Ganman - 04-17-2013, 12:05 AM

RE: Technicalities - by tectak - 04-17-2013, 03:40 AM

RE: Technicalities - by tectak - 04-17-2013, 06:45 AM

RE: Technicalities - by Todd - 04-17-2013, 12:14 AM

RE: Technicalities - by Todd - 04-17-2013, 08:53 AM

RE: Technicalities - by milo - 04-17-2013, 09:44 AM

RE: Technicalities - by Leanne - 04-18-2013, 04:21 AM

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