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Pedestrian Thinking
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04-17-2013, 07:36 AM
I love the title, I think it fits the poem very well. And I like the way the poem is narrated, with the reflective thoughts of the pedestrian. I think it works very well in a subtle, but strong way. But some of the line breaks, as already mentioned, seemed a bit out of place. To me anyways. Thanks for sharing, it was a pleasure to read
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Pedestrian Thinking - by rowens - 04-17-2013, 01:08 AM
RE: Pedestrian Thinking - by UnicornRainbowCake - 04-17-2013, 07:03 AM
RE: Pedestrian Thinking - by Volaticus - 04-17-2013, 07:36 AM
RE: Pedestrian Thinking - by milo - 04-17-2013, 07:42 AM
RE: Pedestrian Thinking - by thymeandoliveleaf - 04-17-2013, 10:58 AM
RE: Pedestrian Thinking - by rowens - 04-17-2013, 10:43 PM
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