04-17-2013, 06:45 AM
(04-17-2013, 12:05 AM)Ganman Wrote: Harsh, dude. These are not works I'm putting together everyday. These are old works I'm posting to try to get new perspective on them. This is a revision of an old work. And I am listening to EVERYTHING you say, so please stop accusing me of "rushing it to the pen." I'm taking it to you to get perspective. You don't have to tear me a new one every time I post. And geez. You don't have to just blatantly tell me I'm a bad writer. I thought I was a good writer, and was working on improving, but I guess I'm just a terrible writer, and I'm inhibiting my progress and wasting your time. Sorry about that....and I would refer you back to your excellent previous piece and my comments on it. Hardly the arsole creating department. If, however, you only want nice things said or nothing at all then please advise and I will concur.
Best,
tectak