Blinded by my desire

[tectak]

I was blinded by my desire for too long.
Loving and caring.
She was, always helping me to succeed.
Yet,
She stood before me,
Blinded by her presence,
I did not see.

Hi halcro,
Good to see a new post. I will come back to this but there are grammatical issues that you should really correct before posting. Punctuation is flaky.
You might think about posting in another forum if you don't see the problems.It is terse verse....so a check over and correction should not take long.
Best,
tectak