04-17-2013, 12:05 AM
Harsh, dude. These are not works I'm putting together everyday. These are old works I'm posting to try to get new perspective on them. This is a revision of an old work. And I am listening to EVERYTHING you say, so please stop accusing me of "rushing it to the pen." I'm taking it to you to get perspective. You don't have to tear me a new one every time I post. And geez. You don't have to just blatantly tell me I'm a bad writer. I thought I was a good writer, and was working on improving, but I guess I'm just a terrible writer, and I'm inhibiting my progress and wasting your time. Sorry about that.