An Ode to People

[tectak]

Okay. So I have a concept- essentially humanism - but the way I do it, it's just that. A concept, that doesn't get much better than that, and just pretentiously tries to establish itself as something more. These are all thoughts, even good thoughts in their purest form, but they're not original thoughts, and there's nothing especially uniting them.

That's what I'm getting, anyway. I'm sorry to bring such a shameful poem to the forum, but I guess that's how you learn. As I said, I will be revising this extensively (soon) and posting it when I have something much different. I'll work with the poem I have now as a very, very, very rough formulation of concepts, and see how I can spice it up.

All the best!

God man ganman!
That's the way to do it...and don't sham shame! There is no such thing as bad poetry only as long as everyone agrees not to post it! Believe me. Let this one stew and sip it now and then to remind you of bad old days.
Best,
tectak