04-16-2013, 12:23 AM
Okay. So I have a concept- essentially humanism - but the way I do it, it's just that. A concept, that doesn't get much better than that, and just pretentiously tries to establish itself as something more. These are all thoughts, even good thoughts in their purest form, but they're not original thoughts, and there's nothing especially uniting them.
That's what I'm getting, anyway. I'm sorry to bring such a shameful poem to the forum, but I guess that's how you learn. As I said, I will be revising this extensively (soon) and posting it when I have something much different. I'll work with the poem I have now as a very, very, very rough formulation of concepts, and see how I can spice it up.
All the best!
That's what I'm getting, anyway. I'm sorry to bring such a shameful poem to the forum, but I guess that's how you learn. As I said, I will be revising this extensively (soon) and posting it when I have something much different. I'll work with the poem I have now as a very, very, very rough formulation of concepts, and see how I can spice it up.
All the best!