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04-16-2013, 12:11 AM
The period after Holt was making me wonder. But I think this poem is fine. I am having big problems reading now. Anything. But I can't see anything wrong as a poem. It tells the story fine. Though ever since people started using the word 'fridge', I've had to think twice whenever I spelled the word 'refrigerator'.
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