04-15-2013, 06:23 PM
After some consideration, I'm going to disagree with your criticism, Milo. If I want to write about the human race, I'll write about the human race. With that in mind, can you give me something constructive? "Don't try to be a philosopher" is not exactly helpful advice.
Is it just not your cup of java? Honestly, I'd like to work with you on this, but I'm having a little difficulty not being completely insulted.
If you think it should be longer, and that I should get into specifics, then I'm willing to work with that and make it more specific. But I need you to be a bit more civil, and also a bit more precise in how you offer your criticism. This is a place for detailed criticism, after all.
I'll play with it some more, then gradually post my progress. Such large scale changes could take awhile though, since it looks like, looking at current criticism, what I have is bare bones. Thanks billy, for the compliment and the advice.
Continued feedback is appreciated.
Is it just not your cup of java? Honestly, I'd like to work with you on this, but I'm having a little difficulty not being completely insulted.
If you think it should be longer, and that I should get into specifics, then I'm willing to work with that and make it more specific. But I need you to be a bit more civil, and also a bit more precise in how you offer your criticism. This is a place for detailed criticism, after all.
I'll play with it some more, then gradually post my progress. Such large scale changes could take awhile though, since it looks like, looking at current criticism, what I have is bare bones. Thanks billy, for the compliment and the advice.
Continued feedback is appreciated.