04-15-2013, 04:19 PM
(04-15-2013, 04:06 PM)Leanne Wrote: The meatballs are better introduced now though.True, but I don't want my poem to necessarily be a compendium of old people stereotypes. :p I'll take that suggestion to mind, but right now, it seems a little extraneous unless I want to turn this into a full-blown narrative poem. Somebody actually suggested I bring this character into my other works, which could be fun, in which case that might be a better application.
You could do with a complaint about noise. Old people do that.
So we're agreed on one fist?

