The Ageist Elderly Man with no Arms in the Parked Car
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(04-15-2013, 04:06 PM)Leanne Wrote:  The meatballs are better introduced now though.

You could do with a complaint about noise. Old people do that. Big Grin
True, but I don't want my poem to necessarily be a compendium of old people stereotypes. :p I'll take that suggestion to mind, but right now, it seems a little extraneous unless I want to turn this into a full-blown narrative poem. Somebody actually suggested I bring this character into my other works, which could be fun, in which case that might be a better application.

So we're agreed on one fist? Big Grin
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RE: The Ageist Elderly Man with no Arms in the Parked Car - by Ganman - 04-15-2013, 04:19 PM



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