The Ageist Elderly Man with no Arms in the Parked Car

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The Ageist Elderly Man with no Arms in the Parked Car

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04-15-2013, 04:09 PM

i think the extra stanza works well, it turns an already good last stanza into a hook.

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The Ageist Elderly Man with no Arms in the Parked Car - by Ganman - 04-15-2013, 05:49 AM

RE: The Ageist Elderly Man with no Arms in the Parked Car - by Leanne - 04-15-2013, 06:00 AM

RE: The Ageist Elderly Man with no Arms in the Parked Car - by Todd - 04-15-2013, 06:06 AM

RE: The Ageist Elderly Man with no Arms in the Parked Car - by shemthepenman - 04-15-2013, 06:35 AM

RE: The Ageist Elderly Man with no Arms in the Parked Car - by shemthepenman - 04-15-2013, 06:50 AM

RE: The Ageist Elderly Man with no Arms in the Parked Car - by Leanne - 04-15-2013, 06:57 AM

RE: The Ageist Elderly Man with no Arms in the Parked Car - by tectak - 04-15-2013, 07:12 AM

RE: The Ageist Elderly Man with no Arms in the Parked Car - by Todd - 04-15-2013, 08:02 AM

RE: The Ageist Elderly Man with no Arms in the Parked Car - by billy - 04-15-2013, 08:14 AM

RE: The Ageist Elderly Man with no Arms in the Parked Car - by Ganman - 04-15-2013, 04:00 PM

RE: The Ageist Elderly Man with no Arms in the Parked Car - by Leanne - 04-15-2013, 04:03 PM

RE: The Ageist Elderly Man with no Arms in the Parked Car - by Ganman - 04-15-2013, 04:05 PM

RE: The Ageist Elderly Man with no Arms in the Parked Car - by Leanne - 04-15-2013, 04:06 PM

RE: The Ageist Elderly Man with no Arms in the Parked Car - by Ganman - 04-15-2013, 04:19 PM

RE: The Ageist Elderly Man with no Arms in the Parked Car - by billy - 04-15-2013, 04:06 PM

RE: The Ageist Elderly Man with no Arms in the Parked Car - by Leanne - 04-15-2013, 04:07 PM

RE: The Ageist Elderly Man with no Arms in the Parked Car - by billy - 04-15-2013, 04:09 PM

RE: The Ageist Elderly Man with no Arms in the Parked Car - by Leanne - 04-15-2013, 05:32 PM

RE: The Ageist Elderly Man with no Arms in the Parked Car - by Todd - 04-15-2013, 08:57 PM

RE: The Ageist Elderly Man with no Arms in the Parked Car - by Ganman - 04-15-2013, 11:31 PM

RE: The Ageist Elderly Man with no Arms in the Parked Car - by justcloudy - 04-15-2013, 11:40 PM

RE: The Ageist Elderly Man with no Arms in the Parked Car - by Ganman - 04-15-2013, 11:55 PM

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