04-15-2013, 09:10 AM
The form is a little detrimental. I'd divide it up a little more. Make use of stanzas, preferably short stanzas, so this doesn't look so intimidating. Reader-friendly's the word.
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The Lighthouse Keeper edit 1,billy,ganman - by tectak - 04-15-2013, 08:56 AM
RE: The Lighthouse Keeper - by Ganman - 04-15-2013, 09:10 AM
RE: The Lighthouse Keeper - by tectak - 04-15-2013, 02:44 PM
RE: The Lighthouse Keeper - by Ganman - 04-15-2013, 03:44 PM
RE: The Lighthouse Keeper - by tectak - 04-15-2013, 04:18 PM
RE: The Lighthouse Keeper - by billy - 04-15-2013, 10:58 AM
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