The Ageist Elderly Man with no Arms in the Parked Car
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hello, I must say that the title reminded me of that Pearl Jam song 'Elderly Woman Behind The Counter In A Small Town' and, strangely, the blur lyric 'the pay me girl has had enough of the bleeps', but regardless, this is an interesting one.
a line by line is unnecessary as all's been said. I will however reiterate 'i think he wrote them flat too' is great and plus the 'sense' is, dare i say, haptic. S3 conceptually is a bit forgettable, and a lot of the language is uninspiring, but all in all a pleasant read.
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RE: The Ageist Elderly Man with no Arms in the Parked Car - by shemthepenman - 04-15-2013, 06:35 AM



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