04-15-2013, 04:08 AM
The content of the poem is what I'm talking about. And much of the discussion has been about that, not just yours, Leanne. I just used the word you used, though others have leaned toward it too.
It's more of a subject driven poem than a form poem anyway. It works just fine, except something like "childish necrophile" seems a little like filler.
It's more of a subject driven poem than a form poem anyway. It works just fine, except something like "childish necrophile" seems a little like filler.