Tranquility Transcends

[heslopian]

The sun resonates in my spirit and I
Smile. Warmth and repose engulf me
And I am certain nature is mine. This first verse is magical. It's so crisp, clear and wonderfully abstract, referring not to physical things yet still creating imagery. In a vague, moving way I can picture the sun resonating inside a spirit. This is my favourite kind of poetry because it's unpretentious yet utterly powerful.

Tranquility transcends as the sun melts
For the day and the worn sea yawns.

Oh salty wet heavens how sweetly you
Fill my dry lungs? As I watch your The first sentence of this verse feels more like a statement than a question.
sweet seascape I am eternally yours.

"Transcends" in your title is missing an "s".
Thank you for the read, this was a very good, sensual and spiritual poem