04-15-2013, 12:20 AM
Hi,
I think that you made an error in the title
In the second stanza it's spelled right.
I really enjoyed the calmness of your poem
But like Heart, I also noticed the break in line one. To me, it doesn't really add much.
Is the question mark in S3L2 necessary?
Thanks for sharing, it was nice to read on this rainy day
I think that you made an error in the title
In the second stanza it's spelled right.I really enjoyed the calmness of your poem
But like Heart, I also noticed the break in line one. To me, it doesn't really add much.Is the question mark in S3L2 necessary?
Thanks for sharing, it was nice to read on this rainy day