04-15-2013, 12:00 AM
I might be wrong, but shouldn't such words as 'god' be capitalized? Just a tiny thought 
I like your poem, it has potential, and overall I think it has a nice rhythm to it. But I too, couldn't quite figure out what you meant with L7 in the third stanza. It seems a bit vague.
I like your poem, it has potential, and overall I think it has a nice rhythm to it. But I too, couldn't quite figure out what you meant with L7 in the third stanza. It seems a bit vague.