04-13-2013, 02:01 PM
Amy- Thanks, I hadn't read that poem yet, indeed ironic.
tectak- add 'love' to those 3 G's and you've got a good list of potentially annoying forum poems. Why gravity though? I like a good verse about falling apples
Don't want to dwell on this poem, but I'll explain it just in case some were wondering. The motivational speaker I remember spoke about her time spent in a cult. I thought it ironic for the narrator to acknowledge what happened to the speaker, while in the same breath professing his love, talking of her owing him a kiss, walking by the shores of Galilee, etc... I like the idea, but I think the next version of it might have to be in a different form...
tectak- add 'love' to those 3 G's and you've got a good list of potentially annoying forum poems. Why gravity though? I like a good verse about falling apples
Don't want to dwell on this poem, but I'll explain it just in case some were wondering. The motivational speaker I remember spoke about her time spent in a cult. I thought it ironic for the narrator to acknowledge what happened to the speaker, while in the same breath professing his love, talking of her owing him a kiss, walking by the shores of Galilee, etc... I like the idea, but I think the next version of it might have to be in a different form...