To Drink and Drive

[UnicornRainbowCake]

Thanks true, it seems like now I feel an obligation to write another revision

I got so into writing this that I forgot to think that nobody reading it already knew the story, and then I kind of lost the whole idea. I'm going to leave it for a few days so I can get back into it, but your critique has certainly given me a bit of a foundation to actually continue with it.

Thankyou very much