04-13-2013, 07:43 AM
they are bastards! ;-) they simply need sparring.
From a formal perspective I find no nits.
I only stumbled over "pharaohs" in the last line (is the second syllable pronounced as a diphthong carrying one accent on the first vowel in English, because in German it is: phAr-a-Oh-nen "pharaohs").
Is pharaohs pronounced like farrows*?
cheers
serge
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* farrows: these little suckers you find in pig pens often, sucking on the teats of sows. German "Ferkel", dunno the Middle Egyptian word right now)
From a formal perspective I find no nits.
I only stumbled over "pharaohs" in the last line (is the second syllable pronounced as a diphthong carrying one accent on the first vowel in English, because in German it is: phAr-a-Oh-nen "pharaohs").
Is pharaohs pronounced like farrows*?
cheers
serge
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* farrows: these little suckers you find in pig pens often, sucking on the teats of sows. German "Ferkel", dunno the Middle Egyptian word right now)