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Stubs of My Love
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04-13-2013, 07:03 AM
just a revision of my last comments. I completely misread this poem. I didn't read the comments before posting my crit. and I was sure it was about something else. I feel like a twat, but I thought it was about war, a soldier, the canker of patriotism... covered by a veil of romantic love. In which case ignore all about 'substance over style' etc. because it lacks both.
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Stubs of My Love - by c_cwilliams - 04-13-2013, 03:14 AM
RE: Stubs of My Love - by UnicornRainbowCake - 04-13-2013, 05:28 AM
RE: Stubs of My Love - by c_cwilliams - 04-13-2013, 06:17 AM
RE: Stubs of My Love - by ray - 04-13-2013, 06:14 AM
RE: Stubs of My Love - by shemthepenman - 04-13-2013, 06:50 AM
RE: Stubs of My Love - by UnicornRainbowCake - 04-13-2013, 07:00 AM
RE: Stubs of My Love - by c_cwilliams - 04-13-2013, 07:50 AM
RE: Stubs of My Love - by shemthepenman - 04-13-2013, 07:03 AM
RE: Stubs of My Love - by billy - 04-13-2013, 09:24 AM
RE: Stubs of My Love - by c_cwilliams - 04-15-2013, 01:10 PM
RE: Stubs of My Love - by heslopian - 04-13-2013, 10:49 AM
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