04-12-2013, 03:16 PM
done that way, the first two lines give or have no point of reference. as far as a connection to the but line goes. it's not tying in properly (i could be wrong of course but from my pov it's disjointed.
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I first saw him eight years ago
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I first saw him eight years ago - by NakedBear - 04-11-2013, 03:21 PM
RE: I first saw him eight years ago - by billy - 04-11-2013, 04:28 PM
RE: I first saw him eight years ago - by NakedBear - 04-11-2013, 04:43 PM
RE: I first saw him eight years ago - by billy - 04-11-2013, 04:58 PM
RE: I first saw him eight years ago - by NakedBear - 04-12-2013, 02:01 PM
RE: I first saw him eight years ago - by billy - 04-12-2013, 02:12 PM
RE: I first saw him eight years ago - by NakedBear - 04-12-2013, 02:19 PM
RE: I first saw him eight years ago - by billy - 04-12-2013, 03:16 PM
RE: I first saw him eight years ago - by NakedBear - 04-12-2013, 03:48 PM
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