04-12-2013, 02:12 PM
Mr dashboard’s green glowing clock,
or the swaying red light in dusk;
but I will not again look at i think this is now the problem line.
that man blearing back at me from the Co-op’s shadow,
who shakes every night down this street. not sure this lines needed because of shakes in the next line.
a suggestion ;
I look at anything but
that man blearing back at me from the Co-op’s shadow,
after the 2nd line
or the swaying red light in dusk;
but I will not again look at i think this is now the problem line.
that man blearing back at me from the Co-op’s shadow,
who shakes every night down this street. not sure this lines needed because of shakes in the next line.
a suggestion ;
I look at anything but
that man blearing back at me from the Co-op’s shadow,
after the 2nd line