An April Stroll (second edit)

An April Stroll (second edit)

milo

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04-12-2013, 08:52 AM

(04-11-2013, 09:15 AM)Volaticus Wrote: I tried to do a haiku, with an idea I got from a walk outside :-) I'm not quite sure if it's done right, though?

An April Stroll
Ducks peck in the pond
Paddle in slush-iced-water
I pour out my lunch.

a lot of action for a haiku, maybe a senryu?

milo

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An April Stroll (second edit) - by Volaticus - 04-11-2013, 09:15 AM

RE: An April Stroll - by UnicornRainbowCake - 04-12-2013, 08:51 AM

RE: An April Stroll - by Volaticus - 04-13-2013, 12:24 AM

RE: An April Stroll - by milo - 04-12-2013, 08:52 AM

RE: An April Stroll - by billy - 04-12-2013, 02:04 PM

RE: An April Stroll - by NakedBear - 04-12-2013, 02:07 PM

RE: An April Stroll - by billy - 04-12-2013, 02:13 PM

RE: An April Stroll (edited) - by Volaticus - 04-13-2013, 07:01 AM

RE: An April Stroll (edited) - by UnicornRainbowCake - 04-13-2013, 07:28 AM

RE: An April Stroll (edited) - by Volaticus - 04-13-2013, 07:44 AM

RE: An April Stroll (edited) - by justcloudy - 04-13-2013, 09:04 AM

RE: An April Stroll (edited) - by Volaticus - 04-13-2013, 09:15 AM

RE: An April Stroll (edited) - by billy - 04-13-2013, 09:07 AM

RE: An April Stroll (edited) - by billy - 04-21-2013, 04:25 PM

RE: An April Stroll (second edit) - by billy - 04-22-2013, 07:38 AM

RE: An April Stroll (second edit) - by Volaticus - 04-23-2013, 12:29 AM

RE: An April Stroll (second edit) - by vtsai01 - 04-29-2013, 08:27 AM

RE: An April Stroll (second edit) - by Volaticus - 04-29-2013, 08:28 AM

RE: An April Stroll (second edit) - by Magpie - 05-09-2013, 08:55 AM

RE: An April Stroll (second edit) - by Volaticus - 05-09-2013, 10:43 AM

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