04-12-2013, 07:59 AM
some things are more clear in the edit, esp towards the beginning... but it lost its umph for me. it read a lot more flat. for example: the entire aunt dimension is lost, and the speaker getting pushed into the hall at the end was important, made him/her much more vulnerable.
S1, S4 and S5 for me were an improvement, but for the rest I preferred the original.
just my thoughts.
S1, S4 and S5 for me were an improvement, but for the rest I preferred the original.
just my thoughts.
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The howling beast is back.
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