04-12-2013, 02:45 AM
Cloudy - thankyou very much for the lovely words. 
It is all the narrator - thankyou for pointing out the problem with S5 - I didn't see it in that perspective, I'll think of what I can do to that.
I originally had a name for the aunt, but I wasn't too sure if it would make the narrator sound too much like a young girl.
Hopefully I'll get a bit more feedback and then I'll do my first edit. Thankyou
It is all the narrator - thankyou for pointing out the problem with S5 - I didn't see it in that perspective, I'll think of what I can do to that.
I originally had a name for the aunt, but I wasn't too sure if it would make the narrator sound too much like a young girl.
Hopefully I'll get a bit more feedback and then I'll do my first edit. Thankyou
- Amy
(You wouldn't be surprised to know my parents did not christen me UnicornRainbowCake.)
(You wouldn't be surprised to know my parents did not christen me UnicornRainbowCake.)