Takes too long to breathe
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Moving and well written, tmanzano.

I chase his embers in my dreams, like fireflies
but I didn't know
I would hate him so much
for washing up at Little River

I look forward to reading your work, it is most impressive.
my best,
Heart
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Takes too long to breathe - by tmanzano - 04-09-2013, 05:19 AM
RE: Takes too long to breathe - by NakedBear - 04-09-2013, 01:35 PM
RE: Takes too long to breathe - by Volaticus - 04-10-2013, 07:26 AM
RE: Takes too long to breathe - by heslopian - 04-10-2013, 12:21 PM
RE: Takes too long to breathe - by tmanzano - 04-10-2013, 12:35 PM
RE: Takes too long to breathe - by tmanzano - 04-11-2013, 07:47 AM
RE: Takes too long to breathe - by Heartafire - 04-12-2013, 12:24 AM



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