04-12-2013, 12:00 AM
I really like this poem. Personally my favorites are usually short and simple in their structure, but convey a much bigger meaning and I think that this accomplishes that wonderfully. Like the other I, too, love the title. I also am not a huge fan of "oft" but I think that "posit" fits in with the mathematical/ academic theme. Maybe oft fits with that, too....I don't know. I don't have much critique though. You could tweak it a bit if you want, but personally I like it as is.