04-11-2013, 11:52 PM
I really like the new edit. It much more concise and clear. I like the changing rhyme scheme in a poem with this theme. I guess I should critique something, but I like this version a lot. Good job!
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The Waiting Game (second edit) - by Volaticus - 04-03-2013, 02:44 AM
RE: The Waiting Game - by UnicornRainbowCake - 04-03-2013, 03:10 AM
RE: The Waiting Game - by Volaticus - 04-03-2013, 03:53 AM
RE: The Waiting Game - by Volaticus - 04-10-2013, 08:34 AM
RE: The Waiting Game - by billy - 04-10-2013, 09:55 AM
RE: The Waiting Game - by Volaticus - 04-11-2013, 12:12 AM
RE: The Waiting Game - by karinane - 04-11-2013, 01:11 AM
RE: The Waiting Game - by Volaticus - 04-11-2013, 01:43 AM
RE: The Waiting Game (second edit) - by Volaticus - 04-11-2013, 07:33 AM
RE: The Waiting Game (second edit) - by UnicornRainbowCake - 04-11-2013, 07:40 AM
RE: The Waiting Game (second edit) - by Volaticus - 04-11-2013, 08:01 AM
RE: The Waiting Game (second edit) - by UnicornRainbowCake - 04-11-2013, 05:13 PM
RE: The Waiting Game (second edit) - by karinane - 04-11-2013, 11:52 PM
RE: The Waiting Game (second edit) - by Volaticus - 04-12-2013, 01:12 AM
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