I first saw him eight years ago

I first saw him eight years ago

billy Offline

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04-11-2013, 04:28 PM

hi mikey.
i think i got most of it except the 1st couplet.for some reason i'm struggling with making it work. i think it's the 'then' word that's screwing with me.

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I first saw him eight years ago - by NakedBear - 04-11-2013, 03:21 PM

RE: I first saw him eight years ago - by billy - 04-11-2013, 04:28 PM

RE: I first saw him eight years ago - by NakedBear - 04-11-2013, 04:43 PM

RE: I first saw him eight years ago - by billy - 04-11-2013, 04:58 PM

RE: I first saw him eight years ago - by NakedBear - 04-12-2013, 02:01 PM

RE: I first saw him eight years ago - by billy - 04-12-2013, 02:12 PM

RE: I first saw him eight years ago - by NakedBear - 04-12-2013, 02:19 PM

RE: I first saw him eight years ago - by billy - 04-12-2013, 03:16 PM

RE: I first saw him eight years ago - by NakedBear - 04-12-2013, 03:48 PM

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