pass not over
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(04-10-2013, 07:24 PM)serge gurkski Wrote:  Humming soothings to my heart
like a tomcat close to death,

On Good Friday I am bleeding
for a liar crucified:

No more blood of lambs on doorposts.
First of Passovers has passed!

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i love it....it feels right...but ...it looks disjointed.,

what is humming?
in the 2nd; why are you bleeding even if it's metaphorical bleeding (or not)?

the last is the part i loved, though i have no idea why. did someone die and now the passover is pointless?

sorry if all i have bring is questions Blush


Messages In This Thread
pass not over - by serge gurkski - 04-10-2013, 07:24 PM
RE: pass not over - by Crepuscule - 04-10-2013, 09:47 PM
RE: pass not over - by tectak - 04-11-2013, 03:52 AM
RE: pass not over - by serge gurkski - 04-11-2013, 04:52 AM
RE: pass not over - by popeye - 04-11-2013, 08:50 AM
RE: pass not over - by serge gurkski - 04-11-2013, 09:11 AM
RE: pass not over - by popeye - 04-11-2013, 12:33 PM
RE: pass not over - by serge gurkski - 04-11-2013, 03:16 PM
RE: pass not over - by billy - 04-11-2013, 04:00 PM
RE: pass not over - by serge gurkski - 04-13-2013, 08:32 AM
RE: pass not over - by NakedBear - 04-11-2013, 04:06 PM
RE: pass not over - by serge gurkski - 04-11-2013, 05:35 PM



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