04-11-2013, 01:55 PM
Hello JBird, welcome to The Pen, nice to see you getting in early with a poem. This feels more spiritual than religious to me and indicates your mood perfectly and has a good rhyme, I enjoyed the layout of the stanzas, tidy, short and to the point, a nice piece of introspection, thanks for sharing, cheers!
Oh what a wicket web we weave!

