Whispering Whispers
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Hello JBird, welcome to The Pen, nice to see you getting in early with a poem. This feels more spiritual than religious to me and indicates your mood perfectly and has a good rhyme, I enjoyed the layout of the stanzas, tidy, short and to the point, a nice piece of introspection, thanks for sharing, cheers! Smile
Oh what a wicket web we weave!
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Whispering Whispers - by JBird - 04-11-2013, 12:48 PM
RE: Whispering Whispers - by popeye - 04-11-2013, 01:55 PM
RE: Whispering Whispers - by JBird - 04-11-2013, 02:42 PM



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