04-11-2013, 08:23 AM
Thanks UnicornRainbow, crit greatly appreciated. I've heard that if you have to explain your poem to someone, it's probably not a very good poem. I can say that the narrator's love for the motivational speaker is meant to be deeply ironic. Need to work on showing this, though...
Thanks also Volaticus. High school's there because it's based off a speaker I remember when I was in highschool (saying it like that makes it too simpleā¦)
Gary
Thanks also Volaticus. High school's there because it's based off a speaker I remember when I was in highschool (saying it like that makes it too simpleā¦)
Gary

