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04-10-2013, 09:47 PM

(04-10-2013, 07:24 PM)serge gurkski Wrote: Humming soothings to my heart
like a tomcat close to death,

On Good Friday I am bleeding
for a liar crucified:

No more blood of lambs on doorposts.
First of Passovers has passed!

Whew... pretty direct second stanza and I like the imagery in the third. I'm struggling a little with the first though... Why the humming?

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pass not over - by serge gurkski - 04-10-2013, 07:24 PM

RE: pass not over - by Crepuscule - 04-10-2013, 09:47 PM

RE: pass not over - by tectak - 04-11-2013, 03:52 AM

RE: pass not over - by serge gurkski - 04-11-2013, 04:52 AM

RE: pass not over - by popeye - 04-11-2013, 08:50 AM

RE: pass not over - by serge gurkski - 04-11-2013, 09:11 AM

RE: pass not over - by popeye - 04-11-2013, 12:33 PM

RE: pass not over - by serge gurkski - 04-11-2013, 03:16 PM

RE: pass not over - by billy - 04-11-2013, 04:00 PM

RE: pass not over - by serge gurkski - 04-13-2013, 08:32 AM

RE: pass not over - by NakedBear - 04-11-2013, 04:06 PM

RE: pass not over - by serge gurkski - 04-11-2013, 05:35 PM

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