meditation, revised

[tectak]

hi tectak, you haven't been around for a while, but I see you're back just in time.

I see you still very much dislike this piece. that's ok, we can't all like everything. it doesn't hurt my feelings, and I won't start arguing with you about this and that. so, thank you for your critique. I appreciate the points about "it" especially, I'll put some thought into fixing those.

now hopefully the others who did like it the first time around will take a look and see if they think it's an improvement, and what more can be done.

thanks.

-cloudy

Hi cloudy,
Yep. Two great weeks in the wild Scottish Highlands. Just achingly beautiful.
I left milo in charge of the seriously abusive forum and put a rumour about that he was me and I was he....or is it a rumour?
...and no, I do not dislike any posting. I dislike myself for not telling the truth sometimes....so it may come down to the same thing
Best,
tectak