04-09-2013, 05:24 AM
Thanks everyone for your thoughts. Below is a minor edit that incorporates the ones that chimed with my own ...
Minor edit
It is commonly held
that one plus one
equals two;
from two, three will
(usually)
follow, perhaps leading
to four or more.
Yet I would posit
done well
one plus one
becomes one
just bigger
and what may follow
is another day.
Original
It is commonly held
that one plus one
equals two
And from two three will
usually
follow, oft leading
to four or more
Yet I would posit
done well
one plus one
becomes one
just bigger
and what may follow
is another day
OK, I suppose I ought to chuck my hat in the ring. This was just a little plaything dashed off whilst working on something else a few weeks ago, so suitable for a toe in the water here
Minor edit
It is commonly held
that one plus one
equals two;
from two, three will
(usually)
follow, perhaps leading
to four or more.
Yet I would posit
done well
one plus one
becomes one
just bigger
and what may follow
is another day.
Original
It is commonly held
that one plus one
equals two
And from two three will
usually
follow, oft leading
to four or more
Yet I would posit
done well
one plus one
becomes one
just bigger
and what may follow
is another day
OK, I suppose I ought to chuck my hat in the ring. This was just a little plaything dashed off whilst working on something else a few weeks ago, so suitable for a toe in the water here