Something, something, dark side

[neena2504]

I basically used Poe's format of "The Raven" and went with 6 syllables instead of 8.

So it sounds like this:
xxxxxAxxxxxA
xxxxxxxxxxxB
xxxxxCxxxxxC
xxxxxCxxxxxB
xxxxxxxxxxxB
xxxxxB

"The Raven" would be:
xxxxxxxAxxxxxxxA
xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxB
and so on.

It's the first time I used a format to make the beat precise.



So I sort of cheated

Thank you for the critique.

Oh! I hadn't realized that
Great work!