Aubade

[popeye]

Hello Heart and cloudy, thank you both for your critiques and generous comments. Both of you being in accord with your thoughts I'll be lazy and just reply once! The sequence and wording of the last two lines gave me a bit of grief, I was after something succinct and all inclusive with a hard finality, had actually considered heralding, and thought it too soft, I'm not so sure now that you both indicated that is the way to go. Would appreciate your thoughts, cheers!