Hi Jason,
This would be helped by some imagery, and at the very least a read through to catch your obvious mistakes. Read it though once out loud and you'll catch them.
Welcome.
Todd
Oh, and I moved your link to your signature and removed it from the post (we don't allow them in the text of the post). No major issue./admin
This would be helped by some imagery, and at the very least a read through to catch your obvious mistakes. Read it though once out loud and you'll catch them.
Welcome.
Todd
Oh, and I moved your link to your signature and removed it from the post (we don't allow them in the text of the post). No major issue./admin
The secret of poetry is cruelty.--Jon Anderson